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Hey there not really that much too talk about that was bad about this poem. I just wished it was a little bigger. I like that it reminds me of ...

I will be sure to go into his past in the next one. He is not an assassin he is a serial killer, I do not know if you prefer ...

Thanks for the review. I will be sure to separate the next chapter into paragraphs, and in the next one it will explain a little bit about Tommy's past. Just ...

Anybody can take the story for now.

Also I did not have any idea that that quote was from Albert Einstein, I just thought it up because of Dom going crazy.

I'll sum up what I picture Ghost as being, he is a tricker he tricks people into thinking that they are doing what they should. That is proven when he ...

Oh and also there may be some errors on the new verson with words being pushed together because of me seperating the story into paragraphs.

The only parts that I think can't be realistic is Ghost because of him being a figment of Doms imagination. I am working on this one and a sequal that ...

This is pretty good I give it 6/10 which is above average. It does have some mispelling which brought the grade down of it, but it is an alright story.

Im writing a sequal its going to be about Dom going crazy.

Great story perfect in my opinion.