Tusker93

Really good job yet again :D, I think Lupis covered a lot of what I was going to say this time to be honest. I personally think that maybe Isabelle ...

I haven't been reviewing on YWS for a long time and I don't know if you remember some of my previous comments on the previous segments but I really enjoyed ...

This is a great poem, I really loved the way you described everything - the imagery was great. I can see you've really put a lot of work into this ...

Sorry to say this, but overall I didn't enjoy this poem. It feels like you wanted this to be scary and chilling but really it didn't make me feel any ...

Just echoing what the person above me said. Emma seems like a pretty decent character - a character worth incorporating into a proper story actually :D. I'm not sure what ...

Although this was quite slow to begin with and it didn't really interest me at first, I'm really interested in knowing more about Taverus and what Knox does. At the ...

Hey, I really enjoyed this. Specific images such as 'sunless light' and 'darkness unpolluted' really appealed to me. It was easy to read, but I think it needs to be ...

Dude, I like it. You really let me understand how you feel and I think that's one of the most important points of poetry. I really think you should show ...

Awesome, basically perfect as usual. :D I think someone's already mentioned this but... "Yeah, and I poop out watermelons every Friday." That just felt a little awkward for me. Can't ...

Your writing's basically spot on in this one but I've just gotten a little annoyed. The abortion clinic scene and the friend in the toilet just begins to make the ...

Perfect. This was so intense, scary, exciting, enthralling - so many words could describe it. The descriptions were all adequate and more than enough to produce powerful and vivid pieces ...

This had me hooked right from the start all the way to the end and I'm going to read the next chapter straight after I've finished this. In fact, don't ...

Normally, I have a hatred for large amounts of unneeded description which fail to paint a picture effectively. When you said that you think you get rather wordy with description ...

First of all, I'd like to say that I like the idea of the piece and the sort of pace you've used could definitely make it exciting and thrilling. Some ...

Firstly, I really like the style you've employed here - I think it could really force the reader to embrace this character and it would add to the shock horror ...