TurquoiseRoses

Hiya. Here's just my two cents. Well, to start out, this was really short, so I didn't really get a great idea of where your going with it, but I'll ...

Hello. So, I have read this twice through now, mulling over what would be some good advice. I really enjoyed this piece, so as much as I would like to ...

Hiya! Just my two cents. I really liked this. It grabbed me, particularly the beginning portion, it's wonderfully written. Your sentences flowed really smoothly. You have knack for portraying human ...

Hello. So here's just my two cents. :D So, first thing I would like to comment on is your sentence structure. It gets a little repetitive, since quite a number ...

Easily the worst movie adaption I have ever seen is The Lovely Bones. Absolutely loved the novel, absolutely despised the movie. The plot/timeline was all wrong. It didn't even make ...

I really disliked that book. For me, it's right up there with Catcher in the Rye in the "classics I can't stand" category. In my opinion, The characters were so ...

Your the winner of my "i-feel-like-reviewing-so-lets-look-at-the-pieces-with-zero-comments" contest. :lol: Your prize? A review. Okay, so it's not much, but it's something, right? So Ill start off wit

Hey! Ill be your reviewer today! :D I really hope I am always nice and at the same time helpful when giving reviews, but if I'm not please forgive me. ...

Hey! So I thought I would review your piece today. Alright, so I really like your characters here, they have a good dose of personality and I really liked the ...

Hello! I thought I would review your piece today. So, just some "big idea" things I would think about. Starting to eat my meal I glanced up momentarily to check ...

Hey. I'm Turquoise! I thought I'd review your piece today. So, first let me say that I absolutely love the quilt analogy, it really ties the whole piece together, and ...

Hi there. :D So I guess Ill get right into the review. I really don't mean to offend you, but this piece needs alot of work. There were errors in ...

Heya. Well, first let me say the first bit was amazing. I loved the mysterious feel of it, and the dark "Is she insane?" type quality. You had me hooked, ...

:arrow: So, first things first, the intro. Now, there is nothing wrong with it per say. The only thing is, it doesn't really grab the readers attention, and since this ...

Hiya! First, I really like this premise. You could go far with it. Here are a few "big picture" ideas that I would think about. :arrow: Norwegian? There are a ...