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Re: Dew Soaked Grass
Little yellow flowers Cover me tonight Filling the air with fragrance Bringing me delight They lay around me On the dew covered grass They're in my auburn hair Showing my ...
Jun 18, 2011 -
Re: Just the way I like it
Enjoyed this. You being you is the right way for you, so who's to judge, right? Your poem has a hint anarchy surrounding it, deliberately kicking what's socially accepted on ...
Jun 9, 2011 -
Re: Sweet
Very nice. The story you tell is powerful and the message it conveys is universal, never give up. (At least that's what I think it says.) Love the vocabulary the ...
Feb 17, 2011 -
Re: Oh How It Grows Weary
This is my first attempt at reviewing a piece of literature, so it might be a bit.. lacking. :) Blue = Good Red = Not so good/might need changing. Oh ...
Oct 21, 2010
