TripleTravelTales

LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOVE it! I happen to be reading Romeo and Juliet! This is a wonderful TWIST to the story! PM m=when the next part comes out also! PLEASEEEEEEEEEEEEE! :wink: Keep it ...

Hey Stori! Keep it up! I was really into the story! I felt like I was there. Yet, you should explain what the cat lady did. For people like me, ...

Did u spell check? You need too. There are many spelling mistakes. also, At the begining you should explian what the unfamiliar words mean. like griffen. People aren't going to ...

Hey Ollie! this is way to short! It like 20 sentances! You need to make it longer for people to want to read it. Also, instead of putting the thought ...

I really liked this. Through out the whole entire story, I was thinking 'What's going to happen now?' I can't wait for the next chapter to come out! You have ...

Man! This is wonderful! I can't believe you have such a talent! I could never write lyrics like this! It's perfect just the way it is! I always need an ...

I thing you need to bring out this poem a lot more. it doesn't flow really at all. This is a start, and I think you should read throught the ...

O.K! Well it's great. Yet, you sort of left me hanging. Do you mind if I write a sequel? I bet I could do it, now that i have the ...

That is great! I love this! :smt049 Get the next on out ASAP!!! PLEASE!!! I'm dieing for it! Can't wait for #7! TTT :smt055 :smt055

I loved this book so much! It was great! I read it last year. Just in my free time, because my Mom was raving about it. :lol: I didn't like ...

What's it about? And why is it so great? Since your raving sbout it you might as well tell us about it also! :?: TTT :mrgreen:

It was fine. I didn't love it. I sadly couldn't get to review this piece and read the whole thing, but I read the first few paragraphs. I think that ...

Hey! I relized you use a lot of abreviations. I think you should write out the first few so that people would know what you mean(like 'sms'). Also, I relized ...

I LOVE the idea! It's not just interesting,it's great! Keep writing! I hope you succeed very well! Keep posting the great ideas! :idea: Will James Volt's story be based around ...

:D HI! I liked the mix of romance, fiction, and sadness in the story. You tell a lot in the story though. I was hoping that mabey you could show ...