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Lol, yes, I think you know now how actually involved all that copying and pasting is. ^_^ Thanks a ton for doing that. An IOU is in order, I think.

Many thanks for the comments, Jig. I'll get around to your combined story in the near future.

The crit is certainly appreciated, and no worries about any harshness that may come of it. I like to think I can handle it. ;) And returning the favor is ...

Sorry I haven't been updating these threads. I'll get around to it sometime. And Kaz, I think you have the mod power to do so, so if you ever had ...

There's a big difference between writing with big words and writing smartly. I believe that this was written smartly.

This section: You thought that everything would end perfectly, didn’t you? You thought that I, Becca DuGrey, would end up “all right”, my heart stitched back together (“This time, the ...

Awesome! At first I was thinking C as in the A, B, C, D, F scale and I was like "Oh no!" Nice work. I'd definitely be interested to see ...

Many thanks Mattster and Archae. I'm fully pleased you enjoyed it. It is meant to be a story that stands alone. But who knows? I think I have a nicely ...

Ah, many thanks, Sam. I'm glad you liked it. I'll see what I can do with the things you mentioned; definitely worth looking at.

When most people think of Irish literature, they think of Joyce.

Hi, I just noticed one small thing you should probably have in your essay. A paper that talks about Irish authors should probably mention James Joyce. ;)

I never got the impression they were all maps, Jig. I wouldn't worry about it.

"Grapes of Wrath" was pretty good, Cadmium. The ending... well, I suppose you'll see when you get there, but it was rather different.

Hm. That's unfortunate. Some editors surely can be stubborn. Were there any parts in particular that they added?

Now, I feel it necessary to say that 'tresses' is all Tri's fault. Telling me to change a perfectly okay 'hair', lol. Kill him. Lol, I just saw this. Do ...