Trident

Nice and flowing. Cryptic, yet informative. Nice job. One suggestion: The woman had no need of a microphone to project her clear voice. I don't know if I like the ...

Your poem definitely exudes some surrealism. I find it quite odd-sounding, but that is indeed the nature of surrealist work. I'm not sure what else exactly to say about it. ...

I'm getting weird symbols whenver there's supposed to be apostrophes. It's making it almost impossible to read. For the most part I enjoyed it, although it gets rather redundant when ...

Nice piece! I have to admit, I'm a sucker for history and I loved the historical intro. :wink: His advisor came to the open doorway and stopped, looking over the ...

Wow, this is my first review and I was surprised to read such quality writing. This is very, very good. Quite humbling, in fact. The transition from girl to queen ...