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I'm so adjective, I could verb nouns.

  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Realistic Re: Postscripts (Chapter 1)

    Thanks for the review :-) The letter's not my own, it's the thing that kinda prompts the action in the story. The majority of the story will be told in ...

    Jul 17, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Realistic Re: The Days We'll Never Forget: Chapter One - Titch

    Thanks for the review! To answer your question, there will hopefully be a few twists and turns to the story. I don't know if 'mystery' is the right word, but ...

    Jun 2, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Realistic Re: The Days We'll Never Forget: Chapter One - Titch

    Thanks for the review! :) The general definition of bucket list is a list of things you want to do before you die (hence the name, in reference to the ...

    Jun 2, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Realistic Re: The Days We'll Never Forget: Chapter One - Titch

    Thank you so much! :D

    Jun 2, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Realistic Re: The Days We'll Never Forget: Chapter One - Titch

    Thanks for the awesome review! Much appreciated. :) I was a little worried about whether this chapter would feel too info-dumpy. So I'm glad you pointed it out, because it ...

    Jun 2, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Realistic Re: The Days We'll Never Forget: Chapter One - Titch

    Thank you :)

    Jun 2, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, General Re: Eight Reasons Why I Kissed Hayden Beaufort (Part 2/8)

    I know that this is absurdly late, but thank you for th review! Sorry I didn't reply earlier. :-)

    May 30, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, General Re: Eight Reasons Why I Kissed Hayden Beaufort (part 8b/8)

    Thanks so much for the epic review (I dunno if it's just cos I'm on my phone, but it's massive! XD) Some definite food for thought for the rewrites. D: ...

    May 18, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, General Re: Eight Reasons Why I Kissed Hayden Beaufort (part 8a/8)

    Thanks for the awesome review! :D

    May 10, 2015
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: Daffodils

    No worries.

    Apr 30, 2015
  • Short Story » Mystery / Suspense, Dramatic Re: Power of the Secret Keeper

    You're welcome. :) Ah, yes, word limits. Fair enough XD. And, yes that's what I meant about naming the character. It's just a little thing but it does affect how ...

    Apr 2, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, Fantasy Re: Adonia Beloved / Chapter 5

    Whoops, looks like YWS at the reply I tried to leave yesterday. *sigh* Spent a while on it too... Anyway, winter temperature in Australia pretty much depends on where you ...

    Mar 27, 2015
  • Short Story » Teen Fiction, Other Re: Chasing Normal

    THANK YOOOOU!! :D Agree with everything you said (well, not so much the adverbs but I agree I should probably cut down XD). I'm pretty unsure about turning it into ...

    Mar 18, 2015
  • Short Story » Teen Fiction, Other Re: Chasing Normal

    Thank you! I'm definitely planning on working further with this. Currently it won't be a novel, but who knows? The Jane/Malcolm relationship was probably the biggest thing in the story ...

    Mar 10, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, General Re: Eight Reasons Why I Kissed Hayden Beaufort (Part 6/8)

    Yay! Thank you, very much appreciated. :-)

    Mar 5, 2015


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