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Hiiii Adrian! Here with a night-time review. Even though it isn't really all that late, I'm just a weakling in the face of sleep. But I digress. This review's basically ...

Hey Wolf! Here with a quick review as a little thank you for participating in my contest (and also so I can get things straight in my mind for when ...

Hey don! Here to review your story as part of the judging process for the contest and also as a small thank you for participating! I thought that it was ...

Hiya Holy! This will just be a quick review, as a way of saying thanks for entering my contest, and also to help me with the whole judging process. I ...

Hi Pretzel! This'll just be a quick review as a combined thanks for entering my competition/way of me working out the judging. I think you used the prompt really well. ...

Hey Mess! Taken me a while, but I've finally made it here to review. It's a Friday afternoon and I'm actually being productive - who've thought? XD I don't think ...

Heya Messenger. Here to review as promised. I think the switch in POV felt very natural. You two have writing styles that are seeming to gel very nicely together - ...

Hi Labrador! Here to review as requested. :) I think you handled the suspense of this story pretty well at the start of this story. Syaz's taunting of Rafiq was ...

Hello again! Here for another (very, very late) Review Day review! I don't have much to say about this chapter. It's more of a 'developing chapter' which I think was ...

Hello! I thought I'd drop by with a review. Dunno if there'll be any particular order to this review, but I'll just let you know my thoughts as they occur ...

Heya! Here to catch up on your story, and what better occasion than review day? Just a heads up that I'm a bit sick at the moment, therefore not at ...

Hello again! I noticed that you'd posted this chapter, so I figured I'd drop by for a review. Before I start, I noticed that you made a comment about being ...

Hello again! I'm not sure if I'm going to have all that much to say about this chapter. It was nice to read something new, and there does seem to ...

Hello! Finally made it to review! I have to say, it's really awesome to see how these chapters are improving in this rewrite. I remember the previous version of this ...

Hello! Thought I'd drop by with a review, and rescue your story from the Green Room. This story definitely has a lot of potential. The execution's not quite there yet, ...