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  • Poetry » Fantasy, Mystery / Suspense Re: What Lies Beneath

    Thank you :D

    Apr 30, 2014
  • Poetry » Fantasy, Mystery / Suspense Re: What Lies Beneath

    Hey thanks for the nice comment, feel free to take a look at a few of my others if you like ^.^ And I was unsure on the ending also, ...

    Apr 30, 2014
  • Poetry » Fantasy, Mystery / Suspense Re: What Lies Beneath

    Thank you so much for your kind words and for the quick review ^.^ Really glad that you were able to envision the poem, when I write I really write ...

    Apr 29, 2014
  • Poetry » Fantasy, Mystery / Suspense Re: What Lies Beneath

    Hey thank you for the swift review :D Really glad that you liked the poem over all, and that you liked the lines that I enjoyed creating the most ^.^ ...

    Apr 29, 2014
  • Poetry » Horror, Mystery / Suspense Re: Stolen Innocence

    Thank you for the review, and glad you loved it for the good reasons :D I kind of have to disagree with you on the imagery statement because I feel ...

    Apr 9, 2014
  • Poetry » Horror, Mystery / Suspense Re: Stolen Innocence

    Thanks again for your kind words and your review, thanks :D As you can tell, I've tried to upload my reply a few times but it wont let me in ...

    Apr 9, 2014
  • Poetry » Horror, Mystery / Suspense Re: Stolen Innocence

    As I have said in previous comments nothing in this poem has happened to me the idea came to me one night before I went to sleep. Really glad that ...

    Apr 9, 2014
  • Poetry » Horror, Mystery / Suspense Re: Stolen Innocence

    The child in the poem is gender natural; and though I made the monster male I do want to stress that monsters and such acts of violation don%u2019t have genre. ...

    Apr 9, 2014
  • Poetry » Horror, Mystery / Suspense Re: Stolen Innocence

    really glad that you liked my poem and through it was horrifying at the same time. really glad that the last line had the effort i was going for

    Apr 9, 2014
  • Poetry » Horror, Mystery / Suspense Re: Stolen Innocence

    hey sorry for the slow reply I've been meaning to reply for a while but haven't had the time.

    Apr 9, 2014
  • Poetry » Horror, Mystery / Suspense Re: Stolen Innocence

    Thank you for the review and sorry its taken me so long to reply. Glad that you liked the poem for the reasons you said, and that you thought it ...

    Apr 9, 2014
  • Poetry » Horror, Mystery / Suspense Re: Stolen Innocence

    Hey purple thanks for the review. Really glad that you liked my poem and didn't have any actually complaints ^.^ thank you for recognising the imaginary but understanding that the ...

    Feb 22, 2014
  • Poetry » Horror, Mystery / Suspense Re: Stolen Innocence

    Thank you for the review. Really glad that you liked the poem but was disturbed by it. That was the feeling I wanted to reader to experience. Glad that it ...

    Feb 22, 2014
  • Poetry » Horror, Mystery / Suspense Re: Stolen Innocence

    Wow that's for the review!!! Really glad that you didn't expect the ended I really wanted the read to be completely caught by surprise. Mostly happy that you could see ...

    Feb 22, 2014
  • Poetry » Horror, Mystery / Suspense Re: Stolen Innocence

    Thank you for the comment. This was basically the result that I wanted some the poem it isn't particularly a nice topic but it goes without saying this stuff happens. ...

    Feb 22, 2014


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