Toto25

Your poem really caught my attention, especially the conclusion. It felt even though it was an emotional piece it came out dry. I agree with Gracie not to use the ...

Haha, loved it! I liked how each section coincided with each other! It was confusing but I suppose, each fear, of course being irrational would be confusing. :) Your conclusion ...

I liked the idea of the poem and I understood it, but I feel the vocabulary could have been enhanced a bit to make the rhythm of your words less ...

I like the feel of this poem. Especially the first line. I throw a rock and the mirror breaks. I cannot stand to see my face, The emotions are very ...

I think this poem was very interesting. I think that you meant the "it"s in your poem to make the reader think. I believe that sometimes poetry gets taken a ...

Awesome! :) I loved how its right at the time that Alice in Wonderland the movie came out! It has a really clear message. It was easy to understand I ...

This is a very interesting poem. There was this one part though that didn't make sense. the hospital broods with it's face to the highway a clinic to its face ...

The last two lines was very eloquent to me. it made me think...the message in those last to lines is very deep but you made it look effortless to write. ...

This poem speaks to me. :) I love how its not distant from people, how it relates with people on so many different levels. Awesome job! I love it! :)

Absolutely captivating! It makes you think about the deeper issues. I liked how Walt was more like how the rest of the world thinks, how its that moment that matters. ...