Tosh12

Thanks! Like I said above to Vereen, I tend to make a lot of small mistakes and reading over, I never catch all of them. So thanks again!

Thanks! I tend to make a lot of little mistakes, but normally I won't catch them myself. That's why I post it on here. ^_^

Alright thanks! It'll be helpful! And actually no, I accidentally put Chapters 1 and 2 together. Gonna go change that title to that right now actually. ^_^

Thanks! I didn't realize I left out the apostrophe on so many of them. I'll definitely be more careful next time! Also, just to help improve my skills, I will ...

Im sorry? o.o

Thanks! I'll get right on it after school!

Haven't had time to work on it. Most likely will the day after tomorrow!

Thanks. Are there anymore issues you see involving the paragraphing that I could fix?

Also, as for the character reaction, I also edited that and hopefully made it better. If you would please read that part again to tell me what you think? As ...

Thanks! I just got home from school so the first thing I corrected was the paragraph issue.

Thanks! Will do.

Thanks! Then I'll work on editing this part a bit more. This is why I posted it, I never would have caught the mistakes you did. I appreciate the feedback!