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Re: Here it comes again
This is a very good poem. I loved the drama and subject matter. That said, I think you should review your punctuation. Exhausting and sleepless , H ere comes the ...
Sep 28, 2010 -
Re: How Could You?
This is a really good poem. The repetition is very effective. Having said that, I feel that some of the stanzas don't flow very nicely. [quote="kikialicia31"]How could you? Leave me ...
Sep 28, 2010