ToritheMonster

Even if nobody reads them, here's another: how can i tell you i really do love you when you bleed out the words that i say? my heart breaks bit ...

Thanks! Actually, half the time, even I don't know what I'm trying to say. I just sort of write the words as they come to me, and sometimes they have ...

Here's another one (it's a shorty): Equations of the Mind Shall I spin a spider web? Imagination’s eyes are blind These everlasting filaments Equations of the mind.

Bloody brilliant, mate. *likes*

Haha, thanks, Jabs! That actually was how I ended it originally, but my friend told me I should make it more clear that the judge knew it was the man ...

Thank you so much! I'm off to edit it now.

Thanks so much! Yeeah, it's pretty much a quote from the original. That helped a lot. Thank you!

Thanks Skinsy and Calligraphy! Woohoo! Featured work! Thanks, you guys!

Anyone else?

Thanks, Ben. Much appreciated.

No problem! What about... Maximilian? Or... Lysander? Or...Cornelius, if you enjoy odd names.

Gasps! You have synestesia? Or is this poem coincidental?

Oh, did I say Thomas? I meant Richard.

Haha thanks. I was a spazzzzzzy little kid.

Hiya Skins. So, I quite enjoyed this. I don't really have many nitpicks, so I'll just give you my overall review. I think this is turning into an interesting story. ...