ToritheMonster

Thanks everyone!

oh please oh please oh please???????????????????

Could I pleasey please get some more reviews? Anyone!!!!!!!! Please!!!!

thanks!

Hi! Just asking for a few more people to review. Thanks!

Thanks for the reviews!! I'm currently writing more, and editing what I have. :mrgreen:

Thanks for the reviews!! I'm currently writing more, and editing what I have. :mrgreen:

Thanks! Yes, I know it would be mostly for pre-teens. It does get a little more complex as it goes on, but I wasn't really aiming for an adult age ...

Thanks! Actually, this isn't the climax... sort of a mini climax, i guess, if that's possible. And yes, I know the details aren't really there right now, but all will ...

Sorry this one's so long :smt005 .... as you can probably now tell, it would have been weird to cut it off in the middle. :evil: Grrrrr!!!!!!!!! I wish i ...

Yeah, the first parts are a little confusing-- but it will all come together soon. Actually, starting with my next chapter. :mrgreen:

Thanks again! Yeah, this isn't my best chapter. It needs a lot of editing.

Thanks, Seraph. Actually, the dream person and Nerezza aren't supposed to be the same-- you'll see why later. Thanks for all the reviews.

Woah! Before I even review, please rate this accordingly! The f word makes this at least 16+.

I will review later, but good job so far!