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  • Poetry » Other, General Re: A Tribute to Harry Potter

    I think it's a little rough, but that makes it all that much more amazing. =D Loved this poem, keep writing!

    Jul 19, 2011
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Hero's Army

    Thanks for the reviews! Sargsauce, I realize there isn't much of a story line yet, its only chapter one, so I'll definitely be going more into detail later. Also, it's ...

    May 1, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Prologue- Iris Carter

    Well, I actually have ch. 1 and two posted, but I'm doing a lot of editing on them so I don't know if you want to read them yet. =) ...

    Jan 27, 2011
  • Script » General, General Re: The Adventures of Captain McAwesome Pants 1

    I loved this! at times, the dialogue seemed slightly forced, but that was only once or twice. Other than that, this was completely "Awesome!" Keep it up! -Tori =D Pm ...

    Jan 9, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Rose Prologue

    i agree with the other two comments in that it was a little confusing, but it drew me in like it was supposed to! Good work!

    Jan 5, 2011
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: The Scarecrow Minstrel

    I loved the way you made the scarecrow the good guy instead of the villain as many writers might do. It added a different feel to the writing, and i ...

    Dec 29, 2010
  • Other » General, General Re: 5 reasons why these kind of people are better.

    I loved this post, and i think it had some really good points. Anyone who gets mad over this obviously doesn't get the point. =D

    Dec 26, 2010
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: Alzina Adalwolf

    Thanks for the reviews!! i just wanted to let some people know that this was the very first section of a story me and my friend are writing together... this ...

    Sep 7, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Demigod (working title) part 8

    i'm happy you liked it! i wish i could post more a day, but i don't want to over do it. XD but don't worry, i have a ton more ...

    Aug 12, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Demigod

    Hey ppl that are reviewing this, please check out the revised version of these chapters, cause i know these are not very good. =) hahah sorry that you read it ...

    Aug 12, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Demigod (working title) part 3

    I'm glad you don't think it is too much like the Percy Jackson series... i was worried about that.

    Aug 11, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Demigod (working title) part 7

    yeah, her brother is younger, i have to make sure i add that in later. =)

    Aug 11, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: working title: SERAS chapter 2 draft 2

    i haven't read the other chapters, so i can't make much of a comment, but i just wanted to say i liked this piece! keep writing!!

    Aug 10, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Demigod (working title) part 6

    hahah i'm a nerd too, and yes you are very helpful. xD i usually post some everyday, didn't have enough points yesterday, but i try. =)

    Aug 9, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Demigod (working title) part 6

    ahah yes, i was looking for the greek alphabet, but i never really found anything good... Xd ur a lot of help! thank you!! If you ever need any help ...

    Aug 9, 2010


People say I love you all the time - when they say, ‘take an umbrella, it’s raining,’ or ‘hurry back,’ or even ‘watch out, you’ll break your neck.’ There are hundreds of ways of wording it - you just have to listen for it, my dear.
— John Patrick, The Curious Savage