Torigirl15

i didn't get the meaning of the point five at the end of the poem, or maybe im just being dense. i enjoyed reading the poem, it has good flow, ...

thought it was really good! needed a little work on the flow, maybe changing the choice of word in a couple places... have you tried reading it out loud? =) ...

i really liked it! it drew me in right away, and i wanted to read more after i finished the last sentace.i was kind of confused about what kind of ...

i thought it was good, but needed work. you repeated yourself several times, and it was sort of confusing how all of a sudden there is a horrible storm, even ...

this was really good! i enjoyed reading it, and it drew me in from the first line. i liked the description with the 2 barbed wires etc. the caps also ...

it was pretty good, but in my opinion you used the word perhaps a lot. =) the story confused me when it described what the guards were doing to the ...