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Re: The Duty, Chapter 4 {Being Edited}
Once again, another great chapter. I keep getting sucked into this story. The only grammar error I found in this chapter was this: Their (their should be changed to they're) ...
Jul 2, 2008 -
Re: The Duty, Chapter 3 {Being Edited}
This third chapter was very good. Even better than the last two. I didn't see any grammar mistakes in this chapter so you are doing good on that. I do ...
Jul 2, 2008 -
Re: The Duty Chapter 2 {Being Edited}
This second chapter of your story was very good, although it was rather short. I found only one mistake and it is right here: Merlyn can read; the only other ...
Jul 1, 2008 -
Re: Chapter 1, The Duty {Being Edited}
First off, I just wanted to say that this is my first review, so I'm sorry if it does not help you in any way. This story is great and ...
Jul 1, 2008