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  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic Re: Shadow of Bad

    Hey there, Dr Strangelove. I'm here to review your work. (Or try to... I'm not exactly the best at reviewing stuff.) Okay so first of all let me say that ...

    Aug 25, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: I wonder

    Hey Joe! I'm here to review your work (or try to)! First of all let me say that I thought that this piece was very different to the usual stuff ...

    Aug 25, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: The Thing About Time - Prologue

    Hey there, 221B. I'm here to review you (or try to) but first, let me just say Welcome to the site. :) Now back to the whole reviewing thing. Firstly, ...

    Aug 7, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Untitled work

    Hey there, arianaSarroyo. I'm here to review your poem (or what you've got of your poem so far.) I thought that this was a pretty good start to the poem ...

    Aug 6, 2013
  • Poetry » Narrative, Realistic Re: Life.

    Hi there, HighTop. (I like your username ;) ) Wow, you really weren't kidding when you said it was short, were you? Now let me get onto the whole "review" ...

    Aug 6, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: Eli Striker

    Hey there, PollyWannaCracker. I'm here to try review you. (or try.) First off let me say that I quite enjoyed this piece of writing and also agree with mostly everything ...

    Aug 6, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: the things I've done with you

    Hey, maryletsflyaway! Let's see If I can whip you up a half decent. :) This poem was fairly good, even if a little vague. I enjoyed the second person PoV ...

    Feb 11, 2013


Well, if I can't get this chapter to work....at least I will have exercised my fingers.
— Kaia