Titan4ever

That poem was very powerful, and you could feel the tension in the room. I really liked it.

I really liked it! It was well written, and captured the way he felt about Amber. It had true passion, and I could feel the moment. You were very descriptive, ...

I liked it. It made me feel as creeped out as she did. one thing though. There.. right before me, in one of the last torture devices hung Jason. after ...

I was mesmerized by this chapter. I just wanted to find out more. You should add to this chapter because it seemed kinda short. Other than that, it was a ...

I'm not very poetic myself, but I really like it! Keep writing! -Titan

This is really good! Keep writing! I can't wait to read more of your writing! -Titan

Thank you guys for the reviews! I will take your ideas into consideration. Thanks again! -Titan

I liked it. It said to me that you can be anyone you want to be, and it doesn't matter what people think of you.

Hey BugBug! I love this addition to the story. I hope you write more! -Titan

I loved it!!!!!!!!! Keep writing!!!!! -Titan

Oh my gosh! It's a great addition to the story! I'm keeping this review short and sweet so I can finish reading what you've written! So, It's great! -Titan

Hi! I really like it! It's a good start, and comparing to other reviews, I agree that it is like the little mermaid. It is just a little confuzing at ...

Wow. All I can say is Wow. It puts a definite twist into the story. It leaves the reader wondering if it really was a dream...

I loved it! It's another great chapter to your work BugBug! I am determined to finish reading it and reviewing it today! Keep writing! -Titan4ever

It's great! I can't wait to read the next one and find out how Jessica will handle getting closer to giving birth! -Titan