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Re: Rise of the Flames (prologue)
I've read over it again, and it's way better than before :) I couldn't really spot any obvious mistakes, but there's some sentences I think you could make better so ...
Jul 3, 2011
I've read over it again, and it's way better than before :) I couldn't really spot any obvious mistakes, but there's some sentences I think you could make better so ...
Jul 3, 2011
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