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TinyDancer

TinyDancer

  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Flame off

    Hey there, just returning the favor for your review on my piece, Wonderful Tonight. I was a bit confused in the beginning of this, but by the end, I felt ...

    Dec 10, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: Love & War

    Hmmmm...I'm not going to lie. I could have predicted every single event in this story so far. It's very cliche', and hence, slightly boring. If you write a second chapter, ...

    Dec 9, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Flowers in the sky.

    Hey there, just returning the favor for your review on Blue As The Sea. I liked this piece. I'm not a poetry expert, but it was really good! I was ...

    Dec 9, 2011
  • Article / Essay » General, General Re: An Evening with a Vegan

    Hey there: I really liked this. I mean, really really liked it. But, there were some parts where I think you over-did some things. For example, you would occasionally add ...

    Dec 9, 2011
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: The Mood for Melody

    Hello friend :) I love, LOVE, LOVEEEEE this song. And this poem is so amazing. I had goosebumps the whole time! Great job, you really captured the entire scene I ...

    Dec 8, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Deleted 22

    I've read better things by you, but this was nice too! I was kind of lost in some parts, but altogether, good work. Just brush it up a bit, polish ...

    Dec 1, 2011
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Eddie♥

    Hello there, just returning the favor or the review on my piece, The Baldwin on Lexington Road. Anyway... This was really cute and it made me laugh. Which is really ...

    Nov 30, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Ice living

    Another great work! I just love reading the Italian! There were a few small grammar errors in the English version, but that comes when writing in a language that's not ...

    Nov 30, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: In dreams.

    Hey there :) This piece was beautiful! I know a little Latin, so I could kind of pick up the Italian version, and might I say, Italian is a much ...

    Nov 28, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: That Can't Be Jesus, Where's the Crown?

    This is beautiful, and so true! Lovely imagery and tone. There were a few spots where I didn't feel the rhythm of the poem, but then you got back to ...

    Nov 28, 2011
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Gravity's Pull

    Hey there, here to return the favor for your review of Inferno. This piece was beautifully written. You had nice flow and great descrptions. I agree with TheAmazon that you ...

    Nov 28, 2011
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Beauty's Beholder

    Hello :) Just here to return the favor for the review you gave me on Inferno. I was totally lost throughout the whole thing, but I could really see the ...

    Nov 28, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Fire and Shadow: Prologue

    Hey there, I've come to return the favor for your review on Inferno. I loved this piece! It was very informative and descriptive, but not suffocatingly so. I like to ...

    Nov 28, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Wonderland Philosophy

    Hello, I've come to return the favor for your review on my piece, Somewhere Brighter. I really liked this! I am a huge Alice in Wonderland fan, and you totally ...

    Nov 28, 2011
  • Short Story » Fanfiction, General Re: Story 6 (Part 1)

    Hey there, just here to return the favor for your review on my piece, Somewhere Brighter. This is a bit out of my area of expertise, but I will try ...

    Nov 28, 2011


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