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  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Science Fiction Re: Muster Heroes – QuickSave 2

    Hi there Buggie! it's fine if you don't have an introduction, The review matters more anyway! Answer to note 1: Well... Yeah. I mean, that's kinda the point of this ...

    Jul 26, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Science Fiction Re: Muster Heroes – QuickSave 2

    I'm actually a fan of Log Horizon, Megaman Battle Network (which came out much before SAO) and Accel World. I find SAO a bit too rushed for my taste, but ...

    Jul 26, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fanfiction, Action / Adventure Re: The Adventures of Darren Cassidy - Chapter One - The Result of Procrastination

    Note: This review has been deleted

    Jul 19, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: Unorthodox Thieves (Chap. 1)

    Really? I kinda like his sarcasm. Would be less interesting if he was the usual "heroic hero affected by his poor life" thingy. But that's just me I guess, lol. ...

    Jul 16, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: Unorthodox Thieves (Chap. 1)

    Tag doesn't work in Review replies for some reason, BUT I HAVE ARRIVED.

    Jul 16, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Fantasy Re: Muster Heroes – QuickSave 1

    Hi there, Buggie! Let's see what you've written for me, then! 1. Ah. This is the opposite of what I've been taught about ellipses, so, sorry for being French, lol. ...

    Jul 15, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Fantasy Re: Muster Heroes – QuickSave 1

    Hey now, I'm not going to be mad at you, don't worry about it. I'm on this site to GET criticism anyway, right? I like the word nitpick simply because ...

    Jul 15, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Fantasy Re: Muster Heroes – QuickSave 1

    It's ok, the content kinda matters more than the presentation of it. (do try and work on these intros though, that could be fun XD) The point of the first ...

    Jul 15, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Fantasy Re: Muster Heroes – QuickSave 1

    The announcement should be on Shoogaz: Tension hunter, since Volthorn's just a character of the show BUT it was amazing, so nevermind XD Yes, it is kind of boring, since ...

    Jul 15, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Fantasy Re: Muster Heroes – QuickSave 1

    @EnderFlash Fixed! Or so I think! But you're right, little pauses between paragraphs definitely makes the whole thing MUCH better. Thankies :3

    Jul 15, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Fantasy Re: Muster Heroes – QuickSave 1

    Everybody HATES nitpicking DX Oh. I actually wanted to enphasize that Mettrick was saying several "no" really fast with that, so allow me to correct the Don't and put it ...

    Jul 15, 2015
  • Poetry » Historical Fiction, Dramatic Re: Achilles Reborn (Edited)

    To be fair, a lot of heroes from different cultures have so many similarities that it's very possible that they based themselves on each other in some aspects. Again, I ...

    Jul 3, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » General, Fantasy Re: ​The Entwined Tale of the Wishcraftress: Chapter 3

    @TriSARAHtops Thanks for comin' back! Well, every positive bit you mentione is good, because everything i was aiming for is there, so that's a good start for me. Thanks for ...

    Feb 22, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: The Entwined Tale of the Wishcraftress - Chapter 1

    yeah that was a pun. I should probably highlight the pun so it's clear to everyone.

    Jan 28, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: The Entwined Tale of the Wishcraftress Chapter - 2

    We learn everyday :) I too think it's a pretty name, that's pretty much why I used it. Hah, I know that feeling. But yeah, I guess I'll be fine. ...

    Jan 25, 2015


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