TinkerTwaggy

I'm like Dyrow in this aspect: I'm trying to use unusual yet logic expressions when narrating, but sometimes it's just weird. Probably because English's not my native language. I'll try ...

Less grammar mistakes, and more about expressions: something that a spell checker can't check correctly. DANG IT. As for the dark skin part... Stay tuned :p I don't think I ...

DANG IT. DANG. IT. I'm not angry because you're nitpicking (my mom and my teachers always do it anyway), but I'm angry because there are SO MANY mistakes that I ...

Why thank you for the review CTW :) I'm not really surprised I still have that much things to correct though, I'll be sure to correct it all. Also, glad ...

Well thank you for this amazing review :) I hope you'll also be interesting in reading the first 3 chapters( who are already uploaded), I'll be glad to hear your ...

Thanks for this extremly joyful review :D " But the fact that you only mentioned that you lost was MIND BLOWING! " I had to start by pointing out that ...

Wow, thanks :D Sorry to answer this late, I've been quite busy as well, but I'm glad you liked the story that much (put so much effort into it^^). Heh, ...

GLad you liked it :) As for the "Will come up with a better name later", that is DG talking and saying "Will" instead of "I will". Therefore it is ...

Hehe, thanks and glad you enjoyed it :) Defiitly continuing it! Chapter 2 is already online anyway, and working on the next part. Thanks you, I'll keep writing as much ...

Hey Sea, glad you finally made that review! First off I'm really glad you enjoyed this piece of writting, because that was the main point and problably the point of ...

Rough, direct and detailed. I like this review :) Definitly helpful. "I get what you're going for here, but 'fictional' just seems an odd word choice. 'Imaginary' instead, maybe? " ...

Thanks for this review Sea, I was eagerly waiting for that :D Your technical suggestions are definitly helpful, and I'll have to consider most of your advices like the rest. ...

Wow! Full of energy would be a perfect description for this comment ^_^ Well I'm glad it entertained you so much, one more reason for me to continue :D As ...

Glad you liked it OliveDreams :) Yes there will be more, this prologue is only an introduction to the world I'm going to make my characters evolve in, but you'll ...

"Description should be more though so it gives the reader to intake and use their imagination." I'll definitly remember that advice of yours, it IS very important to me! And ...