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  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic Re: solid liquid gas plasma (part three of "depression")

    Hi DemonGoddess. You used the four states of matter, namely solid, liquid, gas and plasma to express your feelings as a human being. This shows a change of feeling from ...

    Nov 7, 2017
  • Poetry » General, General Re: We Need To Talk, Father

    This is a good example of acronym poem. Although it consists of just 7 lines, it hides a message of despair and hope. This poem has an irony in the ...

    Nov 7, 2017


here is the deepest secret nobody knows (here is the root of the root and the bud of the bud and the sky of the sky of a tree called life; which grows higher than the soul can home or mind can hide) and this is the wonder that's keeping the stars apart i carry your heart (i carry it in my heart)
— e.e. cummings