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  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Diamond of the Lost Soul 4

    Timmy here for a reviewwww! I know I am reading this out of context, and out of order, so feel free to admonish me or whatever. But I saw this ...

    Jun 22, 2014
  • Article / Essay » Politics, Realistic Re: What were the Causes of World War One?

    Heyahhhh Livvy! This essay was very different from the other that I just reviewed. Primarily because I have nothing to nitpick except for grammar and punctuation in a few insignificant ...

    Jun 22, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Diamond of the Lost Soul 2

    Timmmy here! This piece was short, blunt, and every word to the point. I loved how you began somewhere, but your work was like a drum. Boom, boom, boom . ...

    Jun 21, 2014
  • Article / Essay » Health, General Re: How does giving up smoking affect lives?

    Timmmmy here! I wasn't expecting an essay on this by you--or by anyone for that matter! It seems to be a subject that most avoid, primarily because those who are ...

    Jun 21, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Rifted - Chapter II - The Watchers

    Timmy here! I don't have that much to say here for nitpicking, since Jameshunt has seemingly grabbed most of it brilliantly. So I will focus on the good points, and ...

    Jun 20, 2014
  • Short Story » Romantic, Teen Fiction Re: Deja Vu

    Timmy here. Okay, so I was not expecting this story. Not. one. bit. Your stories, whether they are novels or short stories, are always about good people. Virtuous people. Reading ...

    Jun 20, 2014
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Other Re: She had asthma

    Timmy here... I don't know how long of a review this is gonna be. Asthma is something totally foreign to me. :P I will just try and relate to my ...

    Jun 19, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Action / Adventure Re: Eyes Wide Shut 6.1

    Timmmmmy is here for a review! This was a neat chapter. And no, I don't think that this is a "filler" chapter. Why would you think that? It had just ...

    Jun 19, 2014
  • Short Story » Realistic, Dramatic Re: Melting Diamonds

    Timmy here for a quick review!! So can I just say that you made this story into something totally unexpected? At first, I was reading this and shaking my head, ...

    Jun 18, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Culture Re: Dada

    Timmy here for a short review! There isn't much to nitpick on this poem, mainly just words of praise, so I will make this quick and wrap it up soon! ...

    Jun 18, 2014
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Darkness without Light

    Timmy here for a quick review!! :D :D Ya know, for some strange reason, I got the impression that it was Maria in this bed, snuggling with the teddy bear. ...

    Jun 17, 2014
  • Poetry » Fantasy, Other Re: ∞ catching infinity ∞

    Timmy is here for a review! :) Due to Alpha's review below, without the usage of emoticons, I must overuse them to make up for the terrible lack. hee-hee :D ...

    Jun 17, 2014
  • Poetry » Narrative, Realistic Re: Winnie, my sweet

    Hey, Livvy! To tell you the truth, this is going to be difficult to review. Its not so much the poem that is difficult to review, although its one of ...

    Jun 17, 2014
  • Poetry » Narrative, Realistic Re: Universal Declaration: Freedom

    Part of the Declaration of Independence, or the Constitution. The right to life, liberty, and the pursuit of happiness. I think that kind of mirrors what this Amnesty International says. ...

    Jun 16, 2014
  • Poetry » Literature, General Re: Release

    Timmy here for a short review!! This was a really amazing poem. I love the visual imagery, and the thought process that goes on inside the writer's mind. Now I ...

    Jun 16, 2014


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— dissonance