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Re: Diamond of the Lost Soul 4
Timmy here for a reviewwww! I know I am reading this out of context, and out of order, so feel free to admonish me or whatever. But I saw this ...
Jun 22, 2014 -
Re: What were the Causes of World War One?
Heyahhhh Livvy! This essay was very different from the other that I just reviewed. Primarily because I have nothing to nitpick except for grammar and punctuation in a few insignificant ...
Jun 22, 2014 -
Re: Diamond of the Lost Soul 2
Timmmy here! This piece was short, blunt, and every word to the point. I loved how you began somewhere, but your work was like a drum. Boom, boom, boom . ...
Jun 21, 2014 -
Re: How does giving up smoking affect lives?
Timmmmy here! I wasn't expecting an essay on this by you--or by anyone for that matter! It seems to be a subject that most avoid, primarily because those who are ...
Jun 21, 2014 -
Re: Rifted - Chapter II - The Watchers
Timmy here! I don't have that much to say here for nitpicking, since Jameshunt has seemingly grabbed most of it brilliantly. So I will focus on the good points, and ...
Jun 20, 2014 -
Re: Deja Vu
Timmy here. Okay, so I was not expecting this story. Not. one. bit. Your stories, whether they are novels or short stories, are always about good people. Virtuous people. Reading ...
Jun 20, 2014 -
Re: She had asthma
Timmy here... I don't know how long of a review this is gonna be. Asthma is something totally foreign to me. :P I will just try and relate to my ...
Jun 19, 2014 -
Re: Eyes Wide Shut 6.1
Timmmmmy is here for a review! This was a neat chapter. And no, I don't think that this is a "filler" chapter. Why would you think that? It had just ...
Jun 19, 2014 -
Re: Melting Diamonds
Timmy here for a quick review!! So can I just say that you made this story into something totally unexpected? At first, I was reading this and shaking my head, ...
Jun 18, 2014 -
Re: Dada
Timmy here for a short review! There isn't much to nitpick on this poem, mainly just words of praise, so I will make this quick and wrap it up soon! ...
Jun 18, 2014 -
Re: Darkness without Light
Timmy here for a quick review!! :D :D Ya know, for some strange reason, I got the impression that it was Maria in this bed, snuggling with the teddy bear. ...
Jun 17, 2014 -
Re: ∞ catching infinity ∞
Timmy is here for a review! :) Due to Alpha's review below, without the usage of emoticons, I must overuse them to make up for the terrible lack. hee-hee :D ...
Jun 17, 2014 -
Re: Winnie, my sweet
Hey, Livvy! To tell you the truth, this is going to be difficult to review. Its not so much the poem that is difficult to review, although its one of ...
Jun 17, 2014 -
Re: Universal Declaration: Freedom
Part of the Declaration of Independence, or the Constitution. The right to life, liberty, and the pursuit of happiness. I think that kind of mirrors what this Amnesty International says. ...
Jun 16, 2014 -
Re: Release
Timmy here for a short review!! This was a really amazing poem. I love the visual imagery, and the thought process that goes on inside the writer's mind. Now I ...
Jun 16, 2014
