Tikaya

Strong contender for this month's Highlights ^^ Also I love how you show your research here, keep it coming!

You're welcome. Now write more of it xd

Love how we're so different. I barely have anything in my head when it comes to what the characters look like or their environment :3 Good luck on the to-do ...

You can make all that interesting if you filter it really through Lydia's eyes. In that you characterise her alongside the room. The thought comes from the Anne Perry's Victorian ...

Ohh that's so frustrating. The order is wrong in the related items which I usually use to navigate chapters. Idk how to fix that though:(

Things have been moving smoothly since I started consulting the oracle of dice =D Thanks for considering my tips :3 And yes! I like this a lot more than the ...

Hahaha wait until you realise I also already read ch2 =D Ohh I love getting all this bg info!! Feel free to ramble more :) I am the person who ...

Oh I like this! Thank you for the explanation :3

Oh my. I literally read this as 2023 not 2013. MY APOLGIES XD But look at how far you've come :3

I meant more that there is no context for the comment in THIS chapter. I don't see it and if you love the line so much you do have to ...

You know what, you should give up on me. I cannot read this in the correct order. What am I even doing.

Don't forget this event got extended so you can technically log all your reviews there too :3 [I'm not rly a poem reviewer so I'll usually only grab them when ...

No problem Alex :) I'm glad you wrote a short story I could read and I did like the concept! At times it felt more like a poem than a ...

The trick for fluffing up paragraphs I found is... just holding some minute descriptions of the room/area back and drop them in between dialogue XD Like instead of writing You ...

Anytime Messenger :) Grammar/Syntax/Punctuation are essential for readability. That's why I point them out; it's what I appreciate in reviews too [Especially because they are usually easy to fix @.@] ...