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Re: The Means to Travel: A U.S. History Screen Play Assignment (Scenes 7-8)
Love the scene setting for scene 7. Much better than scene 5. And he gets his rat back xd some rat at least Hm is this really an alternative world? ...
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Re: The Means to Travel: A U.S. History Screen Play Assignment (Scenes 5-6)
Hi Tao. Finally caught up with most of the stuff that’s older than your screenplay. See, waiting it out eventually lets me come to you, even without bribes =D Tao, ...
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Re: Tales from New Kakari: Remy (pt. 1)
*reads cws* Yay. This is gonna be a good one =D Hi yosh 😊 I am not a romance gal but I shall preserve, despite my trepidation at reading the ...
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Re: docks & champagne
Hallo Roxanne, the fifth December is a very special day for me so I'm looking forward to your poem :) I really like the feel of the poem, I can't ...
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Re: The Book of X | The Kingdom of Ingrid Ch. 2
I like the legend in italics. Also feels like allying with magical beasts might be humans only real defence against such a world hmm I feel like we’ve skipped some ...
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Re: I Love the Way God Made Me
Hi Dove, hope you're doing well :) I thought I'd take a look at this poem to start the day. I already like how you start strong and confident whith ...
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Re: The Scholar and The Guard | The Kingdom of Ingrid Ch. 1
Hi raindrops, I’m doing this thing again, where I do read the chapters in order even before those that are in the Green Room. So let’s do this. I do ...
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Re: Eclipse Prologue Remastered
First of all, love that you managed to make lines appear in your story. I approve of the formatting =D Second of all I feel like I read something of ...
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Re: An Ephemeral, Wholesome Volcano [Ch. XIV, Nine]
Hi Rebel, finally have a bit of headspace for this. Alrighty. I do like the first paragraph. Feels kinda flower-y and sets the mood well. But ofc... ah well. I ...
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Re: // windowsills and snowflakes
Oh once you mentioned the rabbits I stopped thinking of the addressed person as a human and maybe some kinda animal. Dogs do love to dig and I would hazard ...
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Re: Sever the head and the body dies
Must admit I wanted to skip this for now but then I read the summary. And checked the title again. And read the summary again and… uhm let’s just say ...
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Re: Bliss
And to you too a warm welcome. I work in the trenches of the Green Room so I’ll be looking at your story today =D Or maybe your… poem? First ...
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Re: They Don't Stay Dead
Hi and welcome to the Green Room. Saw you post this today and decided to check it out 😉 Nice flag in your avatar btw :3 [First thought it was ...
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Re: Clockwheel Cities - Chapter 1: It All Starts in Paris
So I came back from walking the dog, checked the Green Room, saw all the poems that still need to be reviewed, cried a little and then decided to read ...
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Re: Holding Ruin and Roses
Must say I already love the imagery in your summary. Stitching sanctuaray out of what hurt you and using pain as a way to structure life/the stitch work? That’s really ...
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