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Re: Chapter Thirteen: Two cursed young girls (Part One) (Nina Alexandria Hopkins) (A call from the other side)
Good morning ^^ I am so curious why Nina has no comment on the fact that Alyssa is wearing a nightgown XD Oh I like how poetic this sounds: a ...
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Re: Jeff calls Randy
And one more review for today š Ah okay, I didnāt expect to read of Jeff and Liu so soon again! Hang out? That sounded fun, but a little too ...
Jul 7 -
Re: Lazari thinks on it
Okay, this is the next in line after Sam found Sally last chapter, right? I wish you would have added more details on how Sam escaped Lazari, at least what ...
Jul 7 -
Re: Raisaās diary entry (5/18/1955)
Hello Raisa š I havenāt read anything from your diary in a while so~ I do like the diary style of storytelling. Because on some days, just very little happens ...
Jul 7 -
Re: The Wedding
Hia! I somehow overlook this one in my regular Green Room sweep š But here I am now! Hmmm I wonder what you mean with āin the lost souls wanderā ...
Jul 7 -
Re: Itās a shame, isnāt it? :(
Had a pretty busy morning so my reviews are a bit late. But here we go :3 I remember the first part of this story well (not least bc I ...
Jul 7 -
Re: š©·šŖš The spiraling polka-dotted path of a clown: Chapters 7-8 š©·šŖš
I am so confused. I was sure I read this but no, there are no reason for this one. Letās immediately rectify that error on my part! Hmm I do ...
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Re: Five gloomy Richardson stories
Annnnd back at it again~ Hia once more! AH okay, we are back with Gabriel ā¹ Poor baby. Hmmm I feel like ch1 is v repetitive because you mention so ...
Jul 6 -
Re: Syboleth ch. 27: It
Heya Witch Aet! I just realized that thereās this Syboleth chapter that I have somehow overlooked. Blasphemy! I have come for it now :3 Hitting us with the spoiler warning, ...
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Re: the cross on the cliff side in the rain
Hia! I hope you are having a great day š The summary is already very intriguing! Letās head straight into your poem! I already love the personification in the first ...
Jul 6 -
Re: Recipe for Self-Love
Good morning š This has been in the Green Room for a while so even I, a non-poet, will now try my hand at looking at it ^^ I love ...
Jul 6 -
Re: Amiasā first friend
And we are continuing with this story~ You know there is something very special in having wrong dialogue formatting right in the first sentence :/ I feel like here your ...
Jul 6 -
Re: Heās back?!
That is a strong opening paragraph! I think the following paragraphs are also pretty good but then comes this: But then, if Jay were a hallucination, then wouldnāt Tim feel ...
Jul 6 -
Re: Itinere [On The Way]
Sorry rebel, I took French instead of Latin, so Iāll be doing the English one only XD Ohh I find the line abt treason super intriguing, especially in combination with ...
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Re: You should come on over, itās fun! [Benās POV]
And the next one on the list~ Oh I know which flyer they are talking about! Still it feels like you could add a reminder abt what this means for ...
Jul 6
