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Re: Lightheaded Love
Captured the mentality of an anorexic perfectly, but I agree with a few points made by sargsauce. And definitely, that 'Please' line is confusing. The story is good though. Is ...
Sep 22, 2010 -
Re: The Spirit Boy: Chapter One
Thank you for the helpful reviews, because of them I'll make a few things a little clearer: Certain words are capitalized for emphasis, I've read the works of people like ...
Sep 22, 2010 -
Re: Better To Have Loved And Lost?
I really enjoyed this, although, the tree snapping was very random. Still, a good story and I love how you posed the title.
Sep 21, 2010 -
Re: Dear You.
Makes no sense? This is your way of making sense of your frustration. It's funny and most teens on here can understand it completely. You're simply writing down what you ...
Sep 20, 2010
