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Re: Past the point of no return-page 1
I've read this through, and I am completely confused by the point of view. Not to mention how you throw in mysterious and completely unexplained comments: She was fierce, she ...
Sep 20, 2010 -
Re: Who I Am Is Who You Are
The opening, I will admit, drew me in. However, I began to get bored not soon after. CLICHES 1) The Female Protagonist being in love and wanting to go out ...
Sep 20, 2010