TickSeed

:O One of the things I wish YWS would incoperate is getting notifications when someone comments on your work! Thank you for your intrest and comments. As for the ??? ...

Thank you very much for taking out the time to review my work! Much appreciated. This actually the only chapter I didn't read out loud, and I really should have. ...

I felt like this particular chapter could have used some meat as well, I really was not able to find any bits of information that isn't already reserved for the ...

Finally figured out how to fix it. Enjoy!

Anyone have any idea why the site made the formattiong so wonky? And the question marks where the quotation and apostrophes are supposed to be?

"So, in short, I absolutely love your work! I wouldn't be surprised to see it on a bookstore shelf in a few years! You should definitely keep writing, as you ...

Katiehorsie already covered all the grammer, so I won't go into that. I would like to add a couple of nitpicky things. First off, I love commas, I use them ...

Thank you for the reveiw, and for the generous compliments (I always thought my writing style was a little too stiff and formal.) Actually, I'm really glad you had those ...

Haha. Funny thing about the creation of Bot's character, he went though several name changes though out the writing process. I was editing this at around 2-ish in the morning, ...

I'm sort of crazy in love with this. Your descriptions are simple, crisp, and beautiful! The story is entertaining, but also sticks right with the issue at hand. You managed ...

Thank you so much! I actually wasn't very confident in posting this up, especially considering how amazingly talented the people on this site are. But this is really encouraging. (