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  • Poetry » Narrative, Realistic Re: Letter to the weather

    Thanks for your advise! Think that those tweaks would make it a lot better. -tiarasandnarwhals

    Jun 1, 2015
  • Poetry » Narrative, Realistic Re: Letter to the weather

    Thanks for your comment! I completely agree, who wouldn't love the rain. Reading back I feel like removing the 'the' in the first would make it sound smoother so thanks. ...

    Jun 1, 2015
  • Poetry » Narrative, Realistic Re: Letter to the weather

    Thank you! I think that you're point is valid but I wanted this poem to flow in one long part like the rain! -the poet

    Jun 1, 2015


That's just what translation is, I think. That's all speaking is. Listening to the other and trying to see past your own biases to glimpse what they're trying to say. Showing yourself to the world, and hoping someone else understands.
— Ramy (Babel by R. F. Kuang)