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Threnody

Threnody

  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: Playing the Field - Chapter 1

    Okay: Other people who posted pictures of footballs- it's ENGLISH football. Not American football. Translating to soccer. I think the story really nice. It's not your common romance story, that's ...

    Nov 12, 2008
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Kisses in the Rain, Sunsets on the Water

    Interesting. I probably would leave out the last part. Because the whole poem is about true love and "I devote my heart to you...etc." Last part says "Oh, so your ...

    Nov 11, 2008
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Auburn Queen chapter 1 and 2

    Chapter 1 I cannot be caught. In the red of the rising moon, a man hurried along the cobblestones. The slight tap of his wooden shoes was magnified by the ...

    Nov 11, 2008
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: The Ice Sculptor

    The Ice Sculptor The Ice Sculptor chips away at his latest work Chip chip smack Chip chip smack He is formulating a statue of himself Chip smack chip! The ice ...

    Nov 11, 2008
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: This Body has No Soul

    My soul has shred to pieces My heart has burned to ashes My tears are meaningless As they run every single day Full of sadness My thoughts are only yours ...

    Nov 11, 2008


Do just once what others say you can't do, and you will never pay attention to their limitations again.
— James R. Cook