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Re: Goddess of Time (Part One)
Hi there, let's get to the nitpicks :D Tempus, Oblivious to the hardship she was creating sighed. I couldn't really understand this sentence, clear it up a little? His shoulder ...
Nov 6, 2009 -
Re: Pride
Hi, let's get to the nitpicks! :D but whats done remains done In the sentance before, you need to put a comma since you're starting with a "But." Plus on ...
Nov 6, 2009