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Thanks guys, I'm glad you liked it and found it's humour. :P

Hi Fire of Dawn again! :D Oh ok, I had a strong feeling it was a metaphor. It's a really good one, too! OK, I'm definitely going to go to ...

OK, so now the last poem: Tears Held Blackened Fears! :D First of all, I'd like to say this is a really good title for a poem. Good choice and ...

Hi Marshmellow again! I'm going to review the third poem now: One Day. :D One day One day I want to tell you, that I love you, and that my ...

You're right Galerius, I wasn't really looking for a critique. I just posted to see what people think of it: Humourous, or Irritating? :D Thanks Meadow Lark! Glad to know ...

Thanks, TexanWriter :) I'll be sure to find that! I'm in need of a good laugh XD

OK... thanks..

Hehe, obviously I don't like eating poo. No one does, unless there's someone very strange out there ... Anyone want to come forward? :D

Whooops, sorry guys. Since I was my sister's laptop, YWS was already signed on as VietAngel (my sister's account) when I went on YWS. So what VietAngel just said above ...

To be honest, I agree as well. It sucks, I know, but the point is I had so much fun writing this XD And that's what a hobby of writing ...

OK, I apologise to whoever I offended. :)

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Hi Monument Soul, thanks for saying it's nice. Hehe XD

Darko Demon whatever, it's strange that you posted three comments on my piece of work. At first I thought you were just stating your opinion, but now it seems you ...

Thanks for reviewing, June. I was reading through it again, and yeah, you're right. Some of the characters do seem a little "Flat", but mainly I think it's just Riley. ...