Theyoungjournalist

Brilliantly funny! Great story, had comedy - obviously not a true story (I hope!) Just a few pointers at the begining, instead of saying "anyway" you said "anyways" but, I ...

A very good comical piece, very to the point though, not sure how much of that is true, but your childhood seems crazy! haha Good luck with future writing. (Oh, ...

That was a very good piece of writing, congratulations. From a psychological point of view, I can see that you have put many emotions into the writing. If you touch ...

Firstly, I would like to point out the flaws in this piece of creative writing. Unfortunatly, there were a few grammatical errors. For example 'i' should be written as 'I', ...