TheseStoneWalls

(Okay, so this got edited a bit. There's some pretty important clues about what's going to happen in the rest of the novel that I'd simply skipped over before...Because of ...

(Okay, so this got totally edited. The entire scene with Nat changed, and while it fits a lot more with her character as well as J's character, I'm not totally ...

(Third chapter...I'm kind of just waiting for someone to come through and rip this to shreds. I think it needs a lot of work, so the more advice I can ...

(Hey. Just wanted to let you know that this is a very tentative first draft. My big concern is all the gaps it leaves in what the story is going ...

(Chapter four. I'm unsure about the start of this chapter--I feel as if it introduces Damon as a character exactly the way that I want to portray him, but it ...