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Re: Choices
this one was really good. it says so much with so few words. anyway i really like this one b/c i could relate to it. :oops: this has happened to ...
Oct 24, 2008 -
Re: The Heron
wow, simple yet so descriptive. :P you really are good. and i'm not just saying that. keep on writing! :smt024
Oct 24, 2008 -
Re: [deleted]
hey, it has a good topic but I agree that the last lines need to flow better. you could also make it a bit longer and in depth, but those ...
Oct 24, 2008 -
Re: Halloween
hey, kaylyn! :D This is a really fun poem about halloween. It catches the spirit of the holiday and puts it into words. Great job! :smt074
Oct 24, 2008 -
Re: [Deleted]
Hey Kaylyn! :D Great poem, it flows really good and it catches the meaning. Keep on writing! :smt039
Oct 23, 2008 -
Re: the eternal dream
WOW! :) I cannot believe you thought my poetry was good. :shock: You my good sir, are a natural. I really don't know what to say, except for that it ...
Oct 22, 2008
