Thefadedphotograph

Wow. I really found myself capticated with this. Overall it was great. A few typos but no biggy. In the beginning I didn't have clue as to what was going ...

Loved the peom. Great work. Good Imagery. Good emotion. AT first I found my self wrapped around someone and the one he loves and then it all changed when I ...

I really loved this peice but I had only one problem with it. He kissed me once, you know. The one I told you about before. Kissed me after school, ...

I liked the rythmn. I liked the poem. Even though it was very short it was good writting---to me. :D When I got half way through it I was thinking, ...

I honestly enjoyed the imagery in this and respected it but throughout the entire story I could help but wonder what was going on. Maybe I was reading it to ...

I liked it. It reminds me of something I would have thought up about a year ago when I took a fancy on bright sights, such as slivers of silver ...

I enjoyed reading this a lot. I'd say that my only problem with it was the beginning. The main character was standing in a park under a withered tree and ...

I haven't read a short story on here that has really interested me yet, but out of them all this one sparked my attention the most. It had a consistent ...

Let's see. The only problemI found in this was that in the beginning I thought that it was a little boy not a little girl, it wasn't until the dad ...

Wow, that was crazy. I love the creativity behind it. I didn't see many errors, it was a very enjoyable read. I found my self confused a lot in the ...

I'm sure it was mentioned in previous reviews to mine but I couldn't help but to wonder throughout the entire thing if something was going to happen. It was very ...

The way you wrote this story was very understandable; an easy read. I like how that was consistant and it carried through. I find that if one says too much ...