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Re: Death Was Tempting
Well, that was a nice and quick read. The red gem thing reminded me of The Matrix. Not to be offensive, you made the concept of 'death' a really messy ...
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Re: They Told Me
This work encapsulates all of the personal hurtful experiences that you've been through, and you did a really good job of writing them out. It could have just been a ...
Jun 16, 2017 -
Re: Beauty
That was really good. You've got a knack for describing simple and painful truths in a straightforward manner, not under the disguise of elaborate imageries which can take a lot ...
Jun 16, 2017
