TheWordsmith

It seems interesting. I liked how the characters were talking casually about mythical creatures. I have a question: Which world does this take place on? Earth itself, or merely an ...

Fist off, wow. "Hooked" seems like the right word.... But there were a few things that need improvement. I noticed a lot of run-on sentences, especially when someone was talking ...

I thought Inkheart was boring. Don't get me wrong, it had amazing potential. It was just that I got a third of the way through the story and was like, ...

I agree with others- all the books moved very slowly after you got a few (sixty, say) pages in. It was like she reached the climax and stood there... waiting... ...

Interesting story. So what are the non-humans, vampires? Anyways, here are a few suggestions. "I'm really tired tonight", The , goes before the ". I sighed , partially exhausted , ...

Marketing, that seems to be it. If the entire world knows about it then I'm sure he will find a few fans somewhere. Quote: Eragon, Roran, and Saphira attack the ...

I could only find one mistake, as follows. "Shiny," the girl murmured, delighted by the gold ring she held in her hand. Otherwise, it was a good story. I especially ...

Well, the story beginning was pretty good, but might not be toned down enough, depending on what the age of your audience is. Also, I did wonder why they were ...

I'm going to be real nit picky because, though it needs a bit of work, it was interesting. Her name was Branwen . She was a young girl around the ...

This is so far an amazing story. I did find a few things that could flow better, but otherwise, I'm hooked. A year after this atrocity took place, the evil ...

Loved the series ever since I stumbled across it. Favorite? Among the Betrayed and Among the Hidden and ... uh, well, all of them. Every few months or so I'll ...

It was a good prologue, but it would be better with a lot more emotion. The descriptions were good, but you seemed to use the semicolon or a dash in ...

Hey, Israeli_Camel. So, a bit of advice. It does sound a bit choppy throughout, not only in descriptions, but also in what the characters are saying. Try dividing some of ...

Everyone is saying that it is such a great book (beautiful being the most used adjective) but really, what is the book about (for all the ignoramuses like me out ...

Haven't read Little Women yet. Plan to, though, especially since it's on the summer reading list for me. It was the first time since the Book Thief I've started crying ...