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Re: This Feeling
I have enjoyed reading your feedback on this poem.
Jan 26, 2015 -
Re: This Feeling
You are close, the answer is Grief
Jan 25, 2015 -
Re: World of Secrecy: Truth (chapter two and three)
Thank you for all of that amazing, feedback. It really helped and I just made some changes to the things that you pointed out. Oh, and I have decided that ...
Jan 23, 2015 -
Re: World of Secrecy: Truth
Yes, I am sorry for the lack of punctuation, I have added some and reworded as much as possible. So now it may be easier to understand. This chapter is ...
Jan 23, 2015 -
Re: World of Secrecy: Truth
Thank you, and I feel like a dork, I meant to put right. I was waiting for someone to bring up the creatures, but the fact is that I can't ...
Jan 23, 2015 -
Re: World of Secrecy: Truth
It is because of the later chapters, but I guess I should change the rating of this one.
Jan 23, 2015 -
Re: Pressure
Now, that the punctuation is fixed I can feel the words flow. More like a poem should. If I may ask please head on over and give me a review ...
Jan 23, 2015 -
Re: World of Secrecy: Truth
Thank you,for the input, but if you didn't notice. This is only the first chapter of the book. I plan on putting the finishing copy into an ebook format, therefore ...
Jan 22, 2015