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Re: Where the child cries
Okay will do. Oh and I plan on giving it a full review later on, but right now I am in school for another hour. Please send me a private ...
May 13, 2015 -
Re: Where the child cries
This poem was extremely touching and made me feel like I was watching a movie. However, I discovered an error that tended to ruin the flow of the poem. I ...
May 13, 2015 -
Re: The World of Secrecy Chapter Two "Rough Draft"
Thankyou very much. I was honestly worried about uploading this draft.
May 11, 2015 -
Re: The Mind of an Analyst
No problem at all and if you haven't reviewed my latest chapter in my new book than take a look at my portfolio. The Truth is signing out.
May 5, 2015 -
Re: The Mind of an Analyst
I just read through it, but I don't have the chance to write a review. I will as soon as possible.
May 4, 2015 -
Re: Sugar-Coated Melody
It made a beautiful piece.
May 4, 2015 -
Re: Tomato
Thankyou I will review it as soon as possible. I have a list built up of pieces to review. At the moment the list is full of your work and ...
May 4, 2015 -
Re: Roses and Violets Speak Volumes of You
I plan on reviewing your pokemon novels also. I grew up playing pokemon red.
May 4, 2015 -
Re: Tomato
I will be reviewing this when I get a chance
May 3, 2015 -
Re: Roses and Violets Speak Volumes of You
I will be reviewing this when I get a chance
May 3, 2015 -
Re: The World of Secrecy Chapter One "Draft"
Now we see eye to eye on the way I structured this chapter. I was trying to build up some energy at the beginning and end with people feeling dry, ...
Apr 28, 2015 -
Re: The World of Secrecy Chapter One "Draft"
I honestly agree with the line "drenching in the sweat of a thousand bodybuilders" being very unsanitary. If you wouldn't mind commenting or sending me something else to put in ...
Apr 28, 2015 -
Re: The World of Secrecy Chapter One "Draft"
Thankyou for your nitpicks and comments. I wouldn't mind if you would message me or comment the rest of my punctuation errors.
Apr 28, 2015 -
Re: World of Secrecy: Truth (chapter two and three)
I am so sorry that it took em so long, but I haven't been able to login. However, I must say that this review has helped me start moving out ...
Apr 21, 2015 -
Re: World of Secrecy: Truth (chapter two and three)
The story is barely going, but the details increase as the story progresses. I am also going to make this into a series.
Jan 26, 2015
