TheThinker

Very sad, you nearly made this old stone cry, I could feel the sadness in every word of it. It was a great poem. Great job, keep up the good ...

This is epic for a fifth-grader to write about, but so what if it was a bit cliched, you were in fifth grade. I dare say that's pretty well for ...

I liked it, but needs a bit more about the characters, I know its a prologue and everything is to be mysterious, but needs more info on the characters. overall ...