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my time has come.......... ahhhhhh ima head out I'm tired

ok

I thought the stanzas were 3 3 3 3. but I was probably able to go on with this for ages. like your letters to mom. I have about 10 ...

well, tomorrow is my bday and I'm getting a gift from my dad I don't know if I want it.

Yeah ive been reading them. specifically letters to your mom. I think it is brave that you put those out there. Actually in my poem "how I describe my feels" ...

I want to say this as least bit disrespectful as possible because Im going through the same stuff with my parents, what they did is unforgivable I left my mom, ...

Thank you

I have taken the Suggestions from the comments and fixed all that and believe I have fixed all of those issues

I like this poem. My favorite part is the fact that you gave the brush its point of view. I can relate to how you take your work and criticize ...

Thank you, I noticed that and I'm going to reformat it. I appreciate your review.

That was amazing. It definitely deserves my like.

any criticism negative or positive is excepted because I want to further myself as a writer through the community.