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TheStoicTraveler89

  • Poetry » Other, General Re: A Strike of Light

    To NaRachel, Your poem is good, overall. The location of a chicken coop being a place in which inspiration and realization can be found, especially in regards to a greater ...

    Feb 13, 2010


No, it's not that you didn't succeed. You accomplished a lot, but, if you want to touch people, don't concentrate so much on rhyme and metre. Think more about what you want to say instead of how you're saying it.
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