TheShauzer

Thanks Zhia :)

Thank you :)

Thank you :)

Thanks man ;)

Thanks Alley :) yep, I can see what you mean by skin and again :') they weren't meant to rhyme, they actually have no connection at all :) its only ...

Thanks Renard :) I'll take into account what you've said in my future poems :D

Thanks Reece %uD83D%uDE03 I did enjoy writing this and feel it's one of my best works. The nickname was meant to be 'The Merciful'

Yes I had it in 4 four-line stanzas :') thanks for noticing! Thanks for the review!

Thanks the writer ;)

Thanks strange ;)

Thanks a lot baesch, it's an illusion because the beauty is just a trap so the thorns can get you ;) the illusion is that the beauty is for your ...

Thanks man, wasn't sure about the last semi-colon but the rest were just personal preference ;) nice review

Wow, thanks Legible ;) I completely agree, going to the extremes is one of a writer's biggest tools and too many don't use it :) thanks again!

Thanks fabulous! :)

About the smiling thing, I was looking at something else. He is smiling because he thinks there's a chance his father is better again, living. Cheers.