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TheRebel2007

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  • Poetry » Satire, General Re: Stairs

    And yes, I am glad that I managed to get the true impression of the poem in English as well. To be honest, the alliterative "covering" line was the one ...

    Jan 18, 2023
  • Poetry » Satire, General Re: Stairs

    And yes, I am glad that I managed to get the true impression of the poem in English as well. To be honest, the alliterative "covering" line was the one ...

    Jan 18, 2023
  • Poetry » Satire, General Re: Stairs

    Thanks for the review!

    Jan 18, 2023
  • Poetry » Satire, General Re: Stairs

    Thanks for the review!

    Jan 18, 2023
  • Poetry » Satire, General Re: Stairs

    Thanks for the review, Liminality! I am sorry about the "sights of the world", it was a typo, I meant to write "from the sight of the world", thanks again! ...

    Jan 18, 2023
  • Article / Essay » Narrative, General Re: An Autobiography of An Old School

    Thanks for the review, thea! Actually this is my English Assignment for Winter, and there was a word limit. So, even though I really wanted to add in more details, ...

    Dec 28, 2022
  • Article / Essay » Narrative, General Re: An Autobiography of An Old School

    Thanks for the review! :D

    Dec 25, 2022
  • Article / Essay » Narrative, General Re: An Autobiography of An Old School

    Thanks for the review and the compliments! :D

    Dec 24, 2022
  • Poetry » Narrative, Literature Re: The Last Night of Summer

    Thanks for the review, alliyah! Harmony and Symphony where capitalized to give pressure to those words, and yes, that line might seem slightly strange because I tweaked that line a ...

    Jun 18, 2022
  • Poetry » Narrative, Literature Re: The Last Night of Summer

    Thank you FireEyes for the review! The third stanza that you mention, yes, I did think that that sounded a bit off. I just edited it and interchanged the third ...

    Jun 10, 2022
  • Poetry » Narrative, Literature Re: The Last Night of Summer

    Thanks for the review, Seirre! :p

    Jun 8, 2022
  • Poetry » Narrative, Literature Re: The Last Night of Summer

    Hey there fructose, thanks for the review! I don't know why the rhyming feels forced to you, each line of the entire poem has six syllables, except for the first ...

    Jun 8, 2022
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: An Ode to Liberty

    Hey there, thanks for the review, Lizzy! Well, as I said to Lee in their review, "ad" is a Latin word which means "to" or "till". I guess the problems ...

    Jun 6, 2022
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: The Last Day of Autumn

    Thanks for the review, Lee! The "and" is actually required, as it means that the butterflies rest on the half-dead bark, not the saplings. I think I should add a ...

    Jun 3, 2022
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: An Ode to Liberty

    Thanks for the review, Lee! Firstly, "Free Will and Free Thought" represent one idea, and therefore, I have used "is" instead of "are". Secondly, "ad" is a Latin word, which ...

    Jun 2, 2022


Perhaps when we find ourselves wanting everything, it is because we are dangerously close to wanting nothing.
— Sylvia Plath