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Re: Stairs
And yes, I am glad that I managed to get the true impression of the poem in English as well. To be honest, the alliterative "covering" line was the one ...
Jan 18, 2023 -
Re: Stairs
And yes, I am glad that I managed to get the true impression of the poem in English as well. To be honest, the alliterative "covering" line was the one ...
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Re: Stairs
Thanks for the review!
Jan 18, 2023 -
Re: Stairs
Thanks for the review!
Jan 18, 2023 -
Re: Stairs
Thanks for the review, Liminality! I am sorry about the "sights of the world", it was a typo, I meant to write "from the sight of the world", thanks again! ...
Jan 18, 2023 -
Re: An Autobiography of An Old School
Thanks for the review, thea! Actually this is my English Assignment for Winter, and there was a word limit. So, even though I really wanted to add in more details, ...
Dec 28, 2022 -
Re: An Autobiography of An Old School
Thanks for the review! :D
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Re: An Autobiography of An Old School
Thanks for the review and the compliments! :D
Dec 24, 2022 -
Re: The Last Night of Summer
Thanks for the review, alliyah! Harmony and Symphony where capitalized to give pressure to those words, and yes, that line might seem slightly strange because I tweaked that line a ...
Jun 18, 2022 -
Re: The Last Night of Summer
Thank you FireEyes for the review! The third stanza that you mention, yes, I did think that that sounded a bit off. I just edited it and interchanged the third ...
Jun 10, 2022 -
Re: The Last Night of Summer
Thanks for the review, Seirre! :p
Jun 8, 2022 -
Re: The Last Night of Summer
Hey there fructose, thanks for the review! I don't know why the rhyming feels forced to you, each line of the entire poem has six syllables, except for the first ...
Jun 8, 2022 -
Re: An Ode to Liberty
Hey there, thanks for the review, Lizzy! Well, as I said to Lee in their review, "ad" is a Latin word which means "to" or "till". I guess the problems ...
Jun 6, 2022 -
Re: The Last Day of Autumn
Thanks for the review, Lee! The "and" is actually required, as it means that the butterflies rest on the half-dead bark, not the saplings. I think I should add a ...
Jun 3, 2022 -
Re: An Ode to Liberty
Thanks for the review, Lee! Firstly, "Free Will and Free Thought" represent one idea, and therefore, I have used "is" instead of "are". Secondly, "ad" is a Latin word, which ...
Jun 2, 2022
