TheRazzle

Thanks you guys! This poem is based off of a show I like, where Death City is a good place. I agree Anna, I wanted to add another stanza, but ...

Thanks everybody for your reviews! This was my first piece, no I was naturally nervous. I'm glad I got so much positive feedback! Thanks again! Razzle

I really liked it! It was intense for a poem about wanting to be saintly. Very strong wording, which goes well with not wanting to go to hell. I liked ...